[YAZ 2020] Les Lieutenants des Ombres

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Et voici la réponse de l'auteur :

A great review overall and one of the most useful. I like how much detail he noticed. Most would gloss over such nuances with realizing the mistakes, so very handy for me to make improvements. Please Thank him for me. Yeah sure, he can translate to Italian (with fixes to the errors). It's kinda cool going from English to French to Italian. A nice common connection between countries. 

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218 - (PFA sadique) I think one of the previous entries leading to that section actually warns you that this could happen if you're not careful. But yeah, sadistic but wasn't my idea.
314 - (l'impression que l'on se retrouve dans une carrière à l'extérieur de la mine) A good spot. Not sure why no one spotted that before.
229 - (l'offrande à la déesse) As worded, the prayer is what makes you to roll dice. If you choose to make a donation of gold, you increase the chances of a better outcome. So 2-9 is actually correct.
175 - (à propos du fait que Yaz ne peut pas nous téléporter à l'envi) A little addition to the text can solve that. The same would apply for section 10 as well.